Tuesday, September 29, 2020

The Root

There was a young girl named Lucy. Lucy loved to play her violin. She always walked down the green, prickly grass on the way to her recitals. One day she was late to her recital, so she started running in the tall grass when she didn't notice the big root right in front of her! She tripped on a root and was badly injured! When the pain finally cooled down, she noticed that she had bruised her left knee, twisted her ankle, and could barely walk! She now knew that she wasn't going to make it to her violin recital.

1 comment:

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Melissa. It is not easy to weave random words into a coherent text, but you did it well. I can see the effort you have put into careful choice of descriptive words, and using a variety of types of sentences. These are great author devices to engage, and keep, reader interest. I enjoyed reading your writing. 😊