Tuesday, September 29, 2020

The park

I went to the park because I had a very stressful day at work. I am a manager at BMO and I needed to relax. My job is stressful because my workers are sometimes not productive, and I get blamed for it. I just got blamed today. I needed to relax. I went to the park and saw someone playing the violin. I walked because I was into the calming music. But then, I didn’t realize there was a green, prickly bush in front of me. BAM I hit it. I limped home, Painfully and sad.


  1. I like how you showed the characters feelings with this story. Next time try to change some periods into comas