Tuesday, September 29, 2020

The cactus



There once was a girl that LOVED to play the violin.

But you see violins in middle school are a sign of being a nerd.

So when she walked home she would get beaten up by bullies, so she was ALWAYS BRUISED!

So one day when she just wouldn't cheer up her mom surprised her with a cactus! Now the girl LOVED cacti.

it was green and prickly. “perfect”!

So she put the cactus by her bed and went to sleep.

The next day she looked in the mirror and SCREAMED!

She was the girl who bullied her! OH NOO!


1 comment:

  1. Oh no, the poor girl. So does that mean that she bullied herself, as well as other kids bullying her?
    A cactus certainly fits the description of being green and prickly, so good use of those prompt words.
    It also is lovely to hear that she had a kind mum in the story, as I was feeling a bit sad for her.
    Well done!
    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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