Tuesday, September 29, 2020

The Bullies

On my way to the violin class, I stopped to find seven bullies ready to hurt me. I ran away as they charged at me with mean faces. I ran until I got trapped in an alley where the bullies came closer to me. I took out my Violin and bruised them then silently walked home. When I got home I saw the bullies waiting for me on my green grass. When I tried to get inside my house they threw prickly pine cones at me until they ran out. I went inside and never went to the Violin class again.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Aidan,
    Well done on getting all the words into your story. You've done a great job this week. You have used some great describing words in your story. Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c