Monday, September 28, 2020

Th Green Violin

There was a prickly guy who was always bragging about is green violin. I was tired of him and his violin. made a bet, who ever can play better will win. His was Brandon he is pretty good at playing the violin. I was better. When the preformance day came i walked onto the stage and played. It did not sound right because i forgot to tune my violin. It was over. Brandon won. He played so well. So well the people cried got so mad i took my violin and bruised. I cant understand how he won.

4 comments:

  1. I like how you added conflict between characters in this story. Next time try to remember to capitalise your I's

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  2. I like your story but you need to look at what you are typing because in one sentence it says"I mad a bet"

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