Monday, March 9, 2020

We took no notice of the signs -Part 2

 Me and my friends continued walking deeper into the woods. I was the only one noticing the signs, though it seemed to get brighter within every step we took. As a matter of fact, we were up for 5 hours. Suddenly, we saw a gorgeous view, just up ahead. Kevin, the craziest one, sprinted towards the cliff, without thinking. First we saw him, then we didn’t. “Kevin!” we croaked in hoarse voice repetitively, but it was no use. Then all of a sudden, we heard a “I’m trying to hold on!” from him. He dangling off a 100 meter drop…

                                                 TO BE CONTINUED...

1 comment:

  1. I like how you put lots of describing adjectives and I like how you needed your story with a cliffhanger!