Tuesday, March 3, 2020

disturbed

One day Mr Bobby was minding his business, working and proudly looking at his do not disturb sign. Then James came over and clearly disturbed him “ James can you not see the do not disturb sign.” “No, where is it?” said James. And so Mr Bobby made the do not disturb sign bigger but still no one saw it, so he made it bigger and he made it so super big that it fell down and made him flat as paper. Now whenever Mr Bobby talk about the sign every one said we took no notice of the sign.

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  1. how much did the sign cost btw

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  2. Nathan, you have done a good job when you start off the story, using some really good vocabulary. It is good to see you using dialogue in your writing, but you need to remember to use question marks all the time too.
    Come along and see my class blog at: https://rakau19.edublogs.org/

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