Monday, February 10, 2020

The Airplane Show

We drove to watch an airplane show in the afternoon. I was really excited to see what the airplanes would make in the sky but I was wrong. As I was eating a mango-strawberry ice cream that my mom bought for me, something heavy hit me in the back of the head and I blacked out. When I became conscious in the hospital, It turned out I'd been hit by a flying bird. I described it as something falling out of the sky but as it flew toward us I couldn't see what it was. Then, I fell into a deep sleep and never woke again.

1 comment:

  1. Ivy,
    Your piece is so mysterious. I wonder how the narrator was able to tell the tale having never awakened again? You are a creative writer.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA