Tuesday, February 4, 2020

SLEEP

This is a story about bob. He went shopping but although it was a Saturday nothing was open, not the supermarket or the restaurants. He came across a person sleeping on the streets“Whats going on “bob asked the person said” don’t you know it’s national sleeping day”oh “ bob said well i’m going home “”sleep well the person said “thanks” bob said bob headed home  but before he went to bed he had an ultra super duper filling sandwich with ham and cheese and super good white bread and a cookie then went to his bed and he slept.

1 comment:

  1. Anson,
    I like how much dialogue there was. You should include more punctuation. You can read my 100 WC at https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/9stgqwfryi2os2mkt5alhgz70

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