Tuesday, January 7, 2020

The new man in town

 Once there was a girl named Mary and has been living in new york for 10 years. One day, Mary was crossing the streets. 5 minutes later, a running man with a dog came up to Mary at asked “ which way to the shop “ it panted. The dog pants a lot and Mary to said to the left. Mary asked,” can come to the shops with you?”. The man said yes and Mary was buying food and the man was buying decor for his house. The man asked Mary to be his roommate and Mary said yes. Mary is now happy with his new roommate.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Erin
    Congratulations on your first 100WC for 2020! You have used the prompt in a very natural and easy way. I am so glad Mary now has a roommate. Next time, re-read your work before your publish. That way you can spot any errors you may have made. Keep up the great work.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand