Wednesday, January 8, 2020

The Dog

When I woke up, I remembered that today was Saturday, so I ran out of my house and went to the arcade. Just as I was about to get there I saw a dog running down the street, it stopped right in front of me, all of a sudden I heard a noise. “Which way to the shops”? It panted. I looked down and saw the dog. I was so confused. Who talked to me? It couldn't have been the dog. I heard it again! I turned around and saw my neighbor asking me which way the shops were. “Its that way”. Said the dog.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Tristan. This is a great piece of writing, well done. Your description of what was happening was so good, I could picture it all taking place. Your punctuation is excellent too! A very funny story Tristan, and I really enjoyed reading it. From Heidi (Team 100WC, New Zealand)

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