Tuesday, January 7, 2020

Parry Hotter's 8th year at Hogwarts

Parry Hotter is going back to the school of Hogwarts, of Witchcraft and Wizardry, though he forgot everything, includng how to get back into Diagon Alley. He sees a muggle and asks "Which way to the shops?" Harry panted, "The wizard ones." The muggle looks as if it was the end of the world. "It's him!" she hautily shouts, "It's really the Boy Who Lived! He doesn't even know his way around his magical life." Everyone in London was really mean, and depressing. Harry wishes he hadn't said that. "Oh right!' he thinks "I can use the time-turner and get back to Hogwarts and not fail my O.W.L.'s!... Now how do I use this???"

1 comment:

  1. Hi Leona!
    I really enjoyed reading your paragraph - I think that taking inspiration from books we love is one of the best ways to improve your writing! I laughed quite a bit reading this. One thing to take away is to make sure that you use your tenses consistently, but otherwise, great work for the start of the year!