Friday, November 1, 2019

Slenderman

One day Timothy and Nathan was walking in an alley and found a Drawing of a man with no face so they took the drawing and then the man with no face appeared and it was very frightening then, the person with no face started chasing them and then They out ran the person with no face and then they found a shack and went inside and found a large brown box then they took it outside and then he appeared again but with a balloon then Timothy and Nathan kicked him and punched him then they put him in the box and never opened it again.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Austin
    Your 100WC is really interesting. You have managed to incorporate the words well. Next time try to use full stops at the end of each sentence. It makes it much easier for the reader to understand your story.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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