Wednesday, October 2, 2019

The Takeoff

It was the day of the takeoff, of the NASA spaceship, Bob 2. The whole world was watching. Even all the prisoners were allowed to watch in the food court. The prisoners all gathered around crammed together, kicking and punching to get to the front. Since this was an event that happened once in a decade, the guards watched this event on the screen without moving, not caring about what happened with the prisoners, who quietly crept out of the room, and escaped! One crept into the cockpit of the shuttle in Bob 2, pushing some buttons. 3-2-1 BLASTOFF! Though then when it just wouldn’t take off…..

1 comment:

  1. Dear Leona,
    I really liked the beginning of your story. I wanted to read more after that. I have watched a spaceship takeoff before, but prisoners didn't take over the rocket.
    I really liked your comment! Come check out mine! https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/5v2a1fpij2g8dlj4frgnwfj7v

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