Thursday, October 24, 2019

The lost TV

Once, there was a girl named Lucy who was at her house sleeping in her bed. She woke up, and then she wanted to go get something to eat. ‘’Are there any snacks in here” she said? When she was about to go back upstairs, somebody knocked on the door. She went to the door and asked “Who is it?’’ Nobody said anything. She went upstairs to sleep. When she came back to go to the TV, it was GONE!! “But where did it go?’’ She was very sad. She instead went back to her bed to sleep in her bedroom.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Theeran,
    Great story- though a bit spooky. Was the TV stolen? If so, why did the thief knock on the door. Was the thief a vampire who needed to be invited in? I like your use of all capitals when you said "GONE". This makes it immediately clear to the reader something shocking has happened. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK