Tuesday, October 1, 2019

The Launch!


It was the day when NASA launched their first rocket! “ Remember this needs to be a success there's are cameras everywhere and  I don't want to be an embarrassment to the public,” said the general. As everyone was counting down for the launch. The astronauts were getting ready. Will they do the impossible and launch the first rocket or will they fail? A few minutes passed when it just didn't take off then everyone started to panic “what’s happening” said a person. All of a sudden news came out that someone messed up the system and that there will be no launch today.

2 comments:

  1. I think that you can work on putting more "and"'s in the middle of some sentences but overall, I think you did a good job on the story about the "Launch".

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  2. Artimes,
    I really like how your story makes you feel like you're there at the launch. It would be so cool to be there, don't you think?
    What's your inspiration for this story?
    Check out and comment on my blog:
    https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/ev8modkg8b8mgtol0qgh6bmmn
    ~Grace

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