Monday, October 28, 2019

The Frightening Brown Balloon


 Once there was a boy named Ty. He is 4 years old. One day he was walking outside with his grandma. His Grandma made a bad choice by leaving by himself. Ty went to a weird place that none knows about. Suddenly a frightening brown balloon comes with 3 nails poking out of it. Ty started crying because he got poked and plus he had kicked the balloon away. The balloon was never seen again. 10 days later, the grandam got arrested for leaving the child on the streets. Finally, Ty returns back home, now he is safe and sound.  

1 comment:

  1. I like how you put all the words in good spots that makes it sound good but I think you should put more spaces in the starting and commas at the right places.