Wednesday, October 30, 2019

The Brown Balloon

4 year old James came home with a brown balloon that he got from the fair. He was very excited. The next day he went to school with his brown balloon and saw a bunch of older kids. James showed them his brown balloon but, to his surprise they kicked it away. James never thought that anything was frightening, until now. James chased after the balloon hoping that it wouldn't pop. James jumped up and caught the brown balloon. He neve brought it to school again. James loved his precious brown balloon, and he never trusted anyone with it again.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tristan,
    Well done! I really felt for that poor 4 year old boy and his first encounter with danger. Your story is well-written and emotionally engaging. Keep up the good work. Mrs O Sullivan.

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