Thursday, October 24, 2019

Minecraft

Joseph liked playing Minecraft with his friend Emma. One day Joseph and Emma were making a house. It was going well with a few minor accidents (including minor explosions.) The only thing left to do is make an anvil. So they went mining and ran in to a few mobs and Near death experiences, They finally found enough Iron to make an anvil. Joseph crafted it and they went back to the house. “Place it.” Emma said. “I don’t have it.” countered Joseph. “But where did it go?!” She shouted. Seconds later the anvil appeared over Emma's head and crushed her.

2 comments:

  1. It's always a good idea to build your prompt for the week into a topic with which you're familiar and you've done this well.
    I wonder if instead of beginning a sentence with 'SO' you could have said 'They decided to go mining and ran into ....' What do you think?
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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